Feedback Thoughts

As much as I (and probably most others) like positive feedback, the criticism is most effective in my opinion. It pushes me to be better than before and work harder on my newer work. The most productive feedback experiences I can remember was a few semesters ago. My professor taught us a way on how to give positive and effective feedback. You always start with a nice comment and talk about the good things about the work before the bad because if you start harsh right away, the student might feel attacked. Always start with a good comment then talk about what needs to be worked and improved on. Then always end on a positive note so you don't leave the student on a harsh comment. An example of all this would be, "Hey ___! I really liked ___ in your work, it really grabbed my attention. Although, I think you should work on ___ next time because it didn't make much sense to me. Overall, nice job! I appreciate your work and really looked forward to reading it." This kind of feedback has helped me grow as a learner in school and also at work.

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